Kind of a love song...

I was told to make separate threads for my songs so...
Expect this Music section to get reeeeeeally filled up with my writing since there is no section for me to put them. (Read the Comments and Suggestions section of EP if you don't know what I mean)
Anyway...hope you like this one...and it better get me some reputation points!
*I would giggle here but I do that too much*

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The times we could spend together...
Underneath a setting sun...
Make me wish forever...
That the morning would never come.
I remember how you held me...and you said that I smelled so sweet.
I didn't even have any perfume on but you made me feel complete.
You promised me the moon and the stars and you swore they would never fade.
You asked if I could love you forever and that was a promise that I made.
We rode horses across the prairie, and chased dust devils in the sand.
Oh, the way I felt when you looked in my eyes, and the warmth when you held my hand...
When we made love it was magic...unlike anyone has ever known.
I could hear the angels singing and I was ready for them to take me home.
So I guess this is kind of a love song...not a hello or sweet goodbye.
Because that strap on you had...it really drove me mad...
It was better than any guy.
Oh Angeline!
Sweet Angeline!
You're the prettiest dream with that strap on thing...my sweet Angeline.

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No, I don't really know a girl named Angeline (it sounded like a good fictional name) but after reading the song I just wrote again a few times... I kind of wish I did... ;)

You're not gonna sing it?
BTW, it was pretty good up until that strap on thing.... that's just bizarrrrrre.

Believe me, I write far more serious songs than this but I was having fun...
It isn't about sexuality, it's the twist in the lyrics...kind of a...
"Oh how sweet, woman loves man...man loves woma...what...?"
Anyway...my girlfriend thought it was cute... :P

Haha yeah, funny twist in the end. Gotta say I wasn't ready for this. :)

Alice Cooper is a multi million dollar rock star...
He had a song that was a great 'controversial' hit...
I won't write the whole song but the main lines...

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Mary Ann...I'm really crazy 'bout you 'deed I am.
My life is built around you stars and sand.
I just can't live without you Mary Ann...oh, Mary Ann...
I thought you were...my man.

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Since then he has lived his happy go lucky million dollar baby welcome to my nightmare happily married religious lifestyle.
If you concern yourself with what you write you will never write anything at all... :)

That's a nice poem you wrote there ;) that truly deserves a rep point ^^

I couldn't sleep so I wrote this...hope maybe someone likes it...

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Broken Glasses

I used to see the world around me as someplace I could fight...
To try to prove that I was right...even when I was wrong.
But time goes by, you laugh, you cry and eventually you see...
There was nothing...to be fighting for so long.

Cause when it all goes down...and you take a look around...
Maybe you'll find that the one thing no one knows is...
All your dreams...are made of what you make them mean...
And even broken glasses are...some times made of roses.

I used to feel I could save the world and make everything okay...
If I could find the words to say...everyone would smile.
But I found no words that made everyone somehow healed...
I prayed and I even kneeled every once in a while.

But when it all comes down...to when you take a look around...
Maybe you'll find that the one thing no one shows is...
All their dreams...are not the person you think you've seen...
Their broken glasses just might be made of roses.

I found some rose colored glasses...broken on the street...
Too bad that they belonged to someone that I never got to meet.

Put all your songs in one thread please :) I'll merge this with your other one.

Not bad. Lyrically, they're decent. I'd have to hear what they sound like with music to them before I can pass any more judgement, however.

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Originally Posted by Allea

Anyway...my girlfriend thought it was cute... :P

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I most certainly did not,
And why did you share this with everyone? I thought this was going to be our special night.

Made me laugh, bizzare endings rock xD.

Well it seems to be a toss up on how people feel but it's all fun... :)
One problem I have now though is how to make Xena not mad at me... :(
What do you think...chocolates and flowers or whips and handcuffs... ;)
*giggles*

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Originally Posted by Allea

One problem I have now though is how to make Xena not mad at me... :(
What do you think...chocolates and flowers or whips and handcuffs... ;)
*giggles*

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You might as well give me the choclates.

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polobunny from suggestions thread:
Just start a poetic lyrics/poems thread. I have a few that I alredy wrote, some new ones comes as time pass. I don't mind posting them here if someone also does.

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I have a few more songs I was going to post but the way this thread is set up people won't notice I wrote a new one...
They tend to read the first post of a thread and then comment on it...
I have a song stuck in the middle of this thread now called 'Broken Glasses' that no one even noticed cause it wasn't at the top, but apparently I can't make new threads for comments on different songs.
For that matter, each person who writes a song is apparently supposed to post them in this thread which seems to me odd since it would be either not giving them appreciation for what they write or...they are hijacking my song thread.
Oh well...I guess I'm done posting songs...hope you like the 2 I did post though... :)